Outlaw Howl (Working Title) It's a Comic I'm making.

[OutlawSlick]

The storyline I created is called Outlaw Howl (Working Title). A comic I'm making and will have it up (Eps.1) in Nov. the latest because I have to draw it and get a scanner (2 weeks). Once I get the scanner you will see the characters profiles and what not. The story is basically this young pilot name is Wolfe Eagle Moonstar a.k.a. Slick, who pilots a secret ship under the authority of the Space Forces. His father is the Head Scientist and Engineer of the 3rd District and is one of the generals. His name is Mainto Foxx Moonstar. Wolfe been a pilot in training since the age of 9. The young teen is laidback, quickthinking, flexibile and quite the prodigy child. He's also an Athlete and captain of the Shadow Boxing and Kickboxing Falcons in the Space Forces. He's has a untamed skill with long range Weaponry and is known to become Trigger Happy in a heat of battle. He's 5'11", 157lbs,Short Hair=Brown Hair with Blue and Blonde Highlights, Brown/Yellow Eyes (They become Blue (Classified Info)), He's Healthy in All Aspects and Ripped in Body Type (Similar to Gene). He's created his own gun with he's father's help called The Sevi Revolver a revolver with a 7 bullet chamber (Special Bullets) and a 32 round clip (13mm bullets). It's has a laser and built in sensor for ppl in a 100 foot radius. He has a few friends on teen names Oranlly Shades a.k.a. Rukus who's been Wolfe's friend since the age of 6. Oranlly is quite the built type and great with Mechanics and such. He's about 6'4" around 200lbs (Still Thinking). A girl named Missa Heartly a.k.a. Trix who's a girl experted in Medics and Close Combat. Great with the gun also something to fear. She's about 5'6" 124lbs, Long Hair= Blonde with Pink Highlights, Hazel/Red Eyes, Sizes 30B/22/34 (Yes She's Sexy). Her and Wolfe are close friends and she's has a thing for him. Basically this little crew are the rowdyist in the Space Force's but respected for there skills and backgrounds. Ok now to the story.
Episode 1: Why Me?
This eps. or chapter is the basics of seeing the young 3 chillen and acting normal. Prof. Mainto working and finishing the SRJ-07TL a special ship built to destroy/defend against the Kataruo Katauo Empire and the Space Pirates. This ship is built to be the fastest and strongest in hand to hand combat. (Here's a little secret, one of the ships secret abilities is turning into a Falcon, wierd but when u see the pics u'll see what I mean). The Space Forces has a meeting with the professors and Rank S pilots. The young teens (Everyone like trainnes and such) throughout the meeting are in the Planet Arhcies training and expected to be home in 3 days. After the meeting one of pilots is a traitor and terrorist and space pirate who contacts the G Pirates to attack. An attack happens on the following day and the base gets weakened and some parts are captive. A signal is sent to the trainees in Arhcies and they returned the next day after the attack. The attack is still in progress and all the S pilots are fighting and some killed. Wolfe and his 2 pals are pulled to the side by his dad and he's sent to pilot the SRJ-07TL. Wolfe is at awe with the ships looks and capabilities and accepts the job. The Space Forces aren't even aware of this little job. As Wolfe is in space and destroys a couple ships, his father sends him a signal that the base has been captured and most of the generals are killed. Wolfe is told to leave at once and never return. Wolfe at anger argues with his dad. Mainto says that he has a ship to escape in just in case but to always live in happiness. His dad tells him that he has secured an account for him for repairs and with Rukus the ship should be fine. Wolfe cries and runs to the back of the ship. Mr. Mainto explains to Rukus and Trix that the ship has many capabilites and 2 other scientists will help them with information on it and the attacks. One of the terrorists starts shooting and the transmission is cut off. Rukus goes to the back to tell Slick that they have to find a way to get them back. Trix is in here room crying over the loss of lives. Wolfe agrees and walks around the ship. Rukus is in the engine room checking to see what he's dealing with. At the end Wolfe is in the back looking out the window at the base and his eyes turn Blue.
That the End of Eps. 1

Tell me what cha think. I'll post another Eps. in a few days. Laters

[OutlawSlick]

Many people are seeing and reading what I posted. Please vote or leave a small comment. It's up to ya the people if this comic is gonna happen. Thankyou.

[Arisis]

Little long for 1 ep. I would reconsider the "special ability" for the ship no one like a super ability to be found out until later in the series if any! And please dont say it has more then that. As for the title i can see why you say outlaw howl since his name Wolf but if the hsip turns into a falcon why would the ship (assuming your going to name the ship outlaw howl) have a name such as outlaw howl? shouldnt it relate to its "special ability"? Just suggestions to note but looks good. Needs some stretching you can probably make 2 eps of that. Im not one to diss action since dbz had action but to much talk but it seems rushed almost you need to space things out a bit.

[OutlawSlick]

Thanx. But the ship is not called Outlaw Howl. It is the name of Wolfe's alternate ego (I would of love to kept that secret but hey). The ship is called Crescent Wing and the talking is simple 5-6 pages only the important dirt. The ship does has 2 other specials besides turning into the Falcon Fighter mode and will not be revealed until Eps. 5 and up. I will make about 3 more ships that have special abilities 2 of the ships belonging to the pirtaes and 1 belonging to an unknown Outlaw and maybe 1 to make it seem wierd. A little hint to the whole it's nothing brash I try to keep it real and simple as possible. I will highly have comedy and relaxing in the comic because making everything serious is no fun. I want people like the characters and then the story. Don't worry because each eps. is about 30-50 pages long, so thanx for saying to stretch it but if I feel it's to much I will. Since I can cook up about 5 pages a day with great detailing and such. The action of the story will be about 10 pages the most with ships (simple fights) and the serious climatic scenes with be about 20 which will be onlyin 5 eps. and the series will be about 15-25 eps. That's it don't want to over do it. I will have about 1-3 comics a month depending on my flow and if I feel inspired to. But I won't keep ya waiting. Hit me back with more opinions and please vote. And oh yeah I have an idea of the main characters I just finished sketching them and it's pretty sweet. I'm have them in a final copy and inked in by the time they will be posted. If ya people want to put ur own characters I will take 5. And vote on the good ones. Please be descriptive. Laters

[Sandrock]

You voted for your own story...?

[OutlawSlick]

No. I didn't rate my idea. If I did why would I ask for votes? But it is something to wonder,lol. Anyways I need some opinions I don't care if it's bad or good. Some reviews will help the comic. Thanku, laters

[Tripp]

Come up with an original story and maybe you have something.